Girly789's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aaaron Wood - Maid Outfit]

Hm...

A strong improvement from your other piece, I must admit. What I like about this is especially the dress and expression. You can really see he's enjoying this.

YehYehYeh responds:

Thanks. I personally didn't think this piece was gonna make it into your 'goodie-book'. I'm not gonna be drawing much but Aaron lately, methinks. So if all the people who like my art don't mind, I hope you're looking forward to my next piece!

[Aaron Wood]

Cute

But is there any shading in this image? And why a jacket instead of a shirt? I can understand the eyes are glowing, and he's blushing, but one question, why doesn't he have any lips? Overall, great drawing. I could never do anything like this on MS paint.

YehYehYeh responds:

Thanks. I'll try to work on that in my next piece. Oh and I put the jacket there becuase just a regular shirt would look like I just didn't bother about it. And his eyes aren't glowing, they're sparkling/shining. And yeah, he's blushing.

It's anime chibi graphics. Lips represent lipstick in anime.

[Pocketbabe Midori]

Help and Improvement

Her name is Leaf from LeafGreen and FireRed. Female playable chacter. Go to Bulbapedia.

kevinsano responds:

I was actually unsure of her Japanese name only. Thanks anyway

[bunneary]

I love it!

I have to say, wish I could give it more than 10. Buneary is spelt with one N, by the way. You got everything right, except the head needs to be a little smaller! Out of 10, it gets 500! Sincerely, Girly789.

ratchili responds:

thanks!

[pokeball 2......]

Brilliant job!

The Poke ball from Pokemon? You added a background and the spikes around it give it more flavour! Plus I love the idea of a sine spot on the poke ball, and loads of white spots in... a BLUE background? Blue's my favourite colour! You are great, sincerely, Girly789.

ratchili responds:

Thank you!!

[Hotty Kitty]

Some wrongs

IMPROVEMENT
1. Either make her wear a skirt or trousers, or make her have a longer shirt
2. Have her be holding ice-cream instead of pulling her shirt
3. If she's wearing underwear, make it visible at both sides!
4. Hair colour should be more natural
5. Blue eyes look nicer than green
6. Shorten her earring
7. Make her fringe not go down up down

This will help the art to be better.

[Stacy <3]

Great

Loved the anime style. Cool. Eyes that match haur! :D

[Seto Kaiba]

Wow

This is super special awesome. LOVED THE ABRIDGED REFRENCE!